In the passage writer argues that four day work is beneficial for employee,company and economic but speakers corrects many things the writer wrote about four days working of the employee.
First,writer point out benefits of four day working of the employee.Four day employee helps to earn profit in the company but speakers contradicts and he says offering four days works force companies to spend more on computers and medical service and hiring of more staffs requires tranning and other services.
Second,writer focus on working four days will helps to maintain personal relation with family but speakers mention that it will be risky and may decrease the quality of life and employee may be deprived from promotion also which may be given for five days workers.This was another part where experience contradicted theory.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , company
...four day work is beneficial for employee,company and economic but speakers corrects many...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , writer
...r days working of the employee. First,writer point out benefits of four day working ...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Four
...its of four day working of the employee.Four day employee helps to earn profit in th...
^^^^
Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , writer
...s tranning and other services. Second,writer focus on working four days will helps t...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...,writer focus on working four days will helps to maintain personal relation with fami...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...hich may be given for five days workers.This was another part where experience contr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 22.412803532 22% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 1373.03311258 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 132.0 270.72406181 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29545454545 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 4.04702891845 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80923759873 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 145.348785872 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659090909091 0.540411800872 122% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 419.366225166 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 13.0662251656 23% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 21.2450331126 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2771481785 49.2860985944 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 233.0 110.228320801 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 21.698381199 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06452816374 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315860960996 0.272083759551 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21676988305 0.0996497079465 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380670004439 0.0662205650399 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21676988305 0.162205337803 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380670004439 0.0443174109184 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 13.3589403974 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 53.8541721854 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.0289183223 186% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.2367328918 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.42419426049 122% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 63.6247240618 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.498013245 187% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 11.2008830022 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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