Your friend visited you in your country and stayed in a hotel that you have recommended. Write a letter to the hotel manager about your friend's unsatisfactory stay. In your letter
Tell about your friend
Described the problem
Suggest some improvements.
Dear Sir/ madam,
I am writing this letter to drawn your concern about the inconvenience faced by my friend in your hotel.
A week ago my friend James sawal visited India for business purpose and on my recommendation he was ready to stayed in your hotel. As James came for some business meeting which was fixed in next morning of his landing. So he told the service staff in advanced to prepared breakfast and bathing arrangement as he didnot wanted to get late for meeting. But he was shocked that the staff didnot gave any attention to his request. As consequences he was late for his meeting and he was very upset over it.
I would like to tell you that hotel staff are very ignorant toward the guest and if customers are not pleased with services offer in hotel than how can anyone think about any establishment in society in future. So i think there should be some training to deal with person in hotel, mere degree is not sufficient to be a staff of hotels. I am looking forward about improvement in your hotel regarding services in future.
Your faithfully.
Gagan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...hink about any establishment in society in future. So i think there should be some traini...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... establishment in society in future. So i think there should be some training to ...
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Line 11, column 253, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dealing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: dealing
...o i think there should be some training to deal with person in hotel, mere degree is no...
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Line 11, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ff of hotels. I am looking forward about improvement in your hotel regarding serv...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...vement in your hotel regarding services in future. Your faithfully. Gagan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74786324786 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5969442362 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7327819035 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5833333333 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0588980680239 0.216113520407 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252380105614 0.0766984524023 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421111863609 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0321674790687 0.12726935374 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366553191728 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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