Some people think that to have a successful life you have to have University education, while others think it’s not that important, discuss both views and give your opinion based on personal experience and knowledge.
The assertion that university degree is a mandatory to have a successful life seems to me constitutes a fundamental misunderstanding among people. Whether to agree it or not is a thought provoking question. Personally, I, like many others, tend to totally agree the viewpoint that without university education become successful is nearly impossible.
The opponents of the argument, clearly put the point forward that there are many examples of successful people around the world who did not completed university education and still became successful most famously Bill Gates, Mark Zuckerberg and Steve Jobs. Their argument do have some justification and might be right to some extent. However, the reality is quite different and these people are some exceptional examples which cannot be used as general rule. On the other hand, there are millions of examples of successful university graduates who have been succeeded because of their academic credentials. Even Bill Gates, Zuckerberg and Steve jobs had the similar level of programming skills as a university graduate.
Again, those who believe that academic degree is not mandatory to be successful in life usually mention that prosperity does not depend on academic qualifications but upon opportunities. This statement also may be true. But, I think opportunity does not come to all and bright academic background is a giant leap towards opportunities. Moreover, a University is not only a place of acquiring academic degree but also a place to learn so many things that help us to become more rounded as human being which is also an indispensable criterion of success.
Apart from the above mentioned reasons, the opponents of the viewpoint, may also claim that success never depends upon grades and the rule of success is hard work and destiny of course. This might also be true with a one eyed view. However, I think success is about all talents and abilities that requires study in academic institutions.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that, there is a range of conflicting arguments opposing and supporting the viewpoint, I am fully convinced that university degree is essential to become successful in life.
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...demic background is a giant leap towards opportunities. Moreover, a University is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, apart from, i think, in conclusion, of course, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22571428571 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98596581306 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551428571429 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2416849366 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.3125 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191728087836 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622469862229 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050060226331 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100027596 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424886910492 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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