Dear Anne,
I am writing this letter to thank you for the lovely birthday present. For the past few days I was looking to buy myself a speaker. However, the same was never on stock. Your birthday gift came as a surprise and it was just something that I wanted - A beautiful wireless speaker. I am very happy with the gift and cannot thank you enough.
Let me explain in detail some of the other presents I received on my birthday. Firstly, my parents gifted me a beautiful dress. I wore the same for the party in the evening. Also, my brother flew in from India and got me a limited edition wrist watch. It is golden in color and has a black dial. In addition, the metallic straps can be adjusted according to the size of the wrist. However, the biggest surprise was the party in the evening which was thrown by my friends. My mom took me out of the house on the pretext of shopping, while my friends arranged the party in the backyard. I had no idea whatsoever.
Overall, I enjoyed my birthday. It is customary in my house to cut the cake at midnight followed by opening the gifts. I attended my birthday party in the evening along with my friends and family. We also had a magician at the party to entertain the guests. His performance was amazing and we all were mind blown with his tricks.
I am looking forward to meeting you during the holidays.
Your Friend,
Katie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k. Your birthday gift came as a surprise and it was just something that I wanted ...
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Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...you enough. Let me explain in detail some of the other presents I received on my birthda...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: golden
...me a limited edition wrist watch. It is golden in color and has a black dial. In addition, the ...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...ith his tricks. I am looking forward to meet you during the holidays. Your Friend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41015625 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40194145964 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4233096036 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.7619047619 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1904761905 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198318958171 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600905089761 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907878926425 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108897729466 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777486973326 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.41 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.