Dear Madam,
I am writing to you to highlight the problems that I am facing with the bicycle parking near my work place.
It gives me immense pleasure to share that I have recently started commuting to work by bicycle as it is one of the best ways to conserve our natural environment. Not only is it eco-friendly but economical as well.
Earlier, I couldn't find time to exercise during week days owing to my busy work schedule. It is one of the best exercises for which I don't even have to set aside any specific time since it fits in my schedule so easily. I must admit that I have become agile since the time i started riding bicycle to work. I can see a positive change in my health owing to cycling.
I would like to bring it to your notice that there are two large garbage bins placed in the vicinity of bicycle parking lot which emit bad odor. Most of the times the lids of these bins are open and the waste is strewn in the nearby areas. This is hazardous to health and has also caused a lot of inconvenience. A lot of people have started parking their bicycles outside the stands causing unnecessary nuisance. While I am happy with my new routine of cycling to work, I am disappointed with the parking facilities.
Request you to change the place of garbage bins to a suitable spot so that the parking does not get affected. I hope you understand the urgency of situation and will take the necessary action as soon as possible.
Thanking You,
Amber
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: couldn't
... but economical as well. Earlier, I couldnt find time to exercise during week days ...
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Suggestion: don't
...s one of the best exercises for which I dont even have to set aside any specific tim...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hange in my health owing to cycling. I would like to bring it to your notice t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45756457565 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47347002166 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3251562865 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5333333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274824200396 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832145342525 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812587068764 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15920830639 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843660693173 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.