Some parents think that children should not read books for entertainment. They should read only serious educational books. Give your opinion.
In our contemporary society, Education is the only source which makes anyone well-versed in a particular subject in order to complete chores with efficacy. The know-how of any area can be grasped from reading and understanding about the concept. Though, some parents want their children to focus only on paramount educational books rather than wasting their time on entertainment book. In my perception, Education is ubiquitous, therefore I totally deplored with this notion. This essay will discuss my views further on this topic.
The first and the foremost, Reading always gives profound knowledge on any subject, however it depends on the material. Parents must give sometime to their children to read entertainment books instead of imposing them on large educational guides. For instance, Students who focus their whole time in reading educational books founded with scarce means of mental ability in researches. However, Less constraints students who amid themselves with both kinds of sources are found with progression in their carrier with lucrative way. Reading right sources with correct balance of knowledge always boasts momentousness in individual life.
Secondly, There is a famous saying "Readers are the leaders". Those infants who devoted their precious time of childhood in reading books of their choices other than curriculum books are the leaders in their respective profession. The reason behind this success, children learn about various aspects of multifarious topics which increasing their learning power and considering any situation they whipped into their aim without any meddling of the circumstances. To illustrate, students with such activities are more successful and sound in their lives. If students love to read entertainment books tha parent should allow them because those books also gave some knowledge to its readers.
To put the afforementioned views of mine in a nutshell, I am on the side to let childrens spend some time on reading fun books because it will enhance their reading power instead of nourishing them to adept only educational knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng and understanding about the concept. Though, some parents want their children to fo...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun constraints is countable.
Suggestion: Fewer
... mental ability in researches. However, Less constraints students who amid themselve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51851851852 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92229028696 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8550150957 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280310614834 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095758852116 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797526196612 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182886336473 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178176895131 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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