In today's modern, many people prefer shopping in a large chain stores, and shopping at small business market become uncomfortable. For that chain stores has controlled the whole market. This situation has a positive and a negative side too.
One of the most advantages is that a large chain store allow for shoppers a wide range of products such as food, clothes and house needs, because it is owned by a huge company. It has access to a variety of product to be offered on the store shelves. Moreover, chain stores it have ability to sell product in their store at lower prices, because they are a part and branches from a large company, it is not impossible for them to look for the manufactures that charge less money. Also, they make a discount shopping for shoppers who buying in very large quantities.
On the other hand, chain stores also have drawbacks. they cannot offer or allow the personalized products or services that small stores provide to the shoppers. Merchants who runs small store are extremely get on with the products that they sell. They easily can make knowledgeable recommendations to their buyer as well as answer all the question about the products, in addition, they can make a special-order items for the customers if they need. In contrast, most of the employees in chain stores usually know little about the items that they sell.
To sum up, it is clearly that chain store has developed the way of shopping and making it more convenient for shoppers, but they also have some effect on making items and things less personal .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, in contrast, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7962962963 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5853483858 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9283990366 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6153846154 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286662956244 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108705152783 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407401440447 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17916595485 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486746645396 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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