Many students are familiar with teachers and many are familiar with their friends.As i being a student i prefer to be close with my friends as well as teacher because of following two reasons which i will explore in the following passages.
Well,we students spend most of our time at the school with our teachers and friends.As the study says that we are influence with that things to whom we spent most of our times.As the statement i agree with both aspect of influencing process by the teachers and friends because many times by seeing the behaviour and life style of teacher students wants to be like them.As i have felt that when teacher have great knowledge about the course and other extra knowledge at that moment i imagine to be teacher and i love to be teacher.Sometimes not only knowledge we are influenced by their personalities as well.Students may influence with way of teaching and habits of teacher.
Second,we can see that many are influence by their friends.There are good as well as bad friends in student life.Some students are following their talented,tidy,smart and active friends so that they could also be like that.Some students are so hard working and conscious towards their study and their career and other students follow them.But there are also some cases that many students are following their bad friends who teach them to be evil and bad.Such bad students gives bad influence to their friends.They won't obey their parents and they do whatever they want and follow the bad path where there is not future and career.And we can see many are following such types of friends.So by this way we can see that students may be influenced by both their friends and teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85910652921 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74835899534 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460481099656 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 97.0 20.1344086022 482% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 233.930663992 48.9658058833 478% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 471.333333333 100.406767564 469% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 97.0 20.6045352989 471% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.45110844103 294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291091262688 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214469170164 0.076458572812 281% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0146327018482 0.0737576698707 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214469170164 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146327018482 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.0 11.7677419355 425% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 58.1214874552 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 10.1575268817 382% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.16 8.01818996416 139% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 10.002688172 255% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.8 10.0537634409 406% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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