As we all know that nowadays people are receiving knowledge and information from many sources which makes them known about various aspect.But some times it is not that much effective to get information from many sources.And i think both knowledge of many subject or specialized on only one both are good due to following reasons.
First,talking about knowledge for many subjects,it is considered as acquiring knowledge of different events and topics.I think it is beneficial for knowing about the different aspect of reading.For example one student have to study many subjects such as math,science,social,english etc.Students are able to cope with all these subjects so that they can have more and more knowledge on the variety of subject.Whether they may do have interest on every subjects they have to read so that they don't have to be blank on their mind if they have little bit knowledge on variety of subjects.It will also helps to increase the memory power of people when they are interacting with different subjects.
Second,talking about to be specified on only one subject matter.It is also the good aspect of reading because if one student is specified in only one subject of his or her interest then it will help them to make their career.For example if one student is interested in medical science then he or she may not give much more attention on variety of subjects.Focusing on only one subject deeply and consistently help student to keep deep root on the their interest.such students thinks that variety of knowledge is not necessary for them.So due to such reasons i think both broad knowledge and specific knowledge is best as per the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, for example, i think, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 277.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03249097473 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19464601175 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490974729242 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6003584229 15% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 92.0 20.1344086022 457% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.096498678 48.9658058833 327% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 464.666666667 100.406767564 463% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 92.3333333333 20.6045352989 448% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.6666666667 5.45110844103 544% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231741540587 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155967370139 0.076458572812 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0189049754401 0.0737576698707 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155967370139 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189049754401 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.4 11.7677419355 411% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.9 58.1214874552 -38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.2 10.1575268817 386% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.08 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.01818996416 139% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.8 10.0537634409 386% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 39.0 10.247311828 381% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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