Dear Sam,
I am writing to apologize for damaging the blazer which I lent from you. I attended the success party of our recently launched software application wearing your blazer. During the event a few drops of the drink were spilt on the coat.
Let me describe the incident in more detail. As I was having a drink at the party, I was hit by a child who was playing around. Due to which the wine glass which I was holding slipped from my hands and a few drops of the drink were spilt on the upper part of the jacket. As the coat is white in color, the marks are clearly visible and it looks awkward.
I took the coat to the drycleaner but the stains didnot go away, as it is still visible clearly.I will replace the coat with a new one. I request you not to worry about the jacket.
Hoping to hear from you soon
Regards
Abhinay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: white
...pper part of the jacket. As the coat is white in color, the marks are clearly visible and it l...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...go away, as it is still visible clearly.I will replace the coat with a new one. I...
^
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I will replace the coat with a new one. I request you not to worry about the jack...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27329192547 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14029011784 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627329192547 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8426551911 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144678843358 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552825959611 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553636763808 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969350902461 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458787356831 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.