Developments had influenced on various aspects of human's life. For instance, if we compare two children with two different moments in history, we can easily see differences in their wants, their interests, their joys and even their behavior.
Apparently, today's children are living in a comfortable campus in order to equipment and facilities which are accessible for them rather than the children who were living half a century ago, but I believe that in some cases our grandparents had easier life than ours.
New material and equipment have brought many facilities in children's life. New toys create this opportunity for children to use their capability and creativity to have whatever they want. The ground is paved for them to learn everything easily by trial and error method. But in the past, of course they didn’t have these chances.
But from the other hand, I think that with due attention to all these facilities, today's children are not more comfortable than when our grandparents were children.
Nowadays, there is a tough competition between parents in order to push their children in the way of being a genius. All of them expect their child to be a scientist or a savant. Most of children have lost their childhood in this conflict and they have forgotten enjoying their best moments of life. But our grandparents were only grappling with their childhood and were enjoying it without any concern. It means that physical comfort is ready for new generation, but most of them don’t have psychological comfort.
A child should have an easy life without any concern and any pressure about future and should enjoy from the present moment and all of its facilities. The childhood will never repeat again. So, it is the parent's responsibility to make everything available for their children, everything that makes the life easy and comfortable for their child. Phantom peace, like our ancestors childhood, physical ease, like all the new creatures which a child should have to enjoy and improve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 180, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the children') or simply say ''Most children''.
Suggestion: Most of the children; Most children
...ir child to be a scientist or a savant. Most of children have lost their childhood in this confl...
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Line 10, column 177, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...ts facilities. The childhood will never repeat again. So, it is the parents responsibility t...
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Line 10, column 205, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
... will never repeat again. So, it is the parents responsibility to make everything avail...
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Line 10, column 390, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tom peace, like our ancestors childhood, physical ease, like all the new creature...
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Line 10, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... new creatures which a child should have to enjoy and improve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, so, for instance, i think, of course, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10843373494 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73257022771 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1641743726 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7647058824 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173366236609 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589396653683 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783377918541 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118233637567 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957370942253 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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