Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Give your opinion
Life is the blessing of God and if you want to live your life as per your choice then you enjoy more .Now time has been change because everyday population is increasing so quickly. People are find it difficult to get home , but they world
created a solution of that problam they made hig-rise apartment for living .Although they got solution but mostly people are not happy with it .people who are living in high-rise apartments face so many problams everyday . They can't enjoy their life properly because they mostly remain in flat system , they can't get chance to feel fresh flowers, weather, air , and snowy and sunny weather. Another problam they face is that they usually don't use stairs , they prefer lift yo get down which can be cause of their bad health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 627.0 1615.20841683 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 315.596192385 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67910447761 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18686102929 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716417910448 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 506.74238477 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7606492071 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.75 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106534862158 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059255884652 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760680867795 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789808790785 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170552707782 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.