Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students.
Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students.
Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.
It is generally taken for granted that universities and other educational centers, as we all are aware and probably have experienced, not only can shed light on the dark aspects of every human’s personal survival, but also pave the path for the flourishing every individual’s skill and talents in social life. There are number of people admitting that all students should have opportunity to study in any university they desire. However the rest take it for granted that only universities should accept students who are in high levels of studying. Scholars are of the point of view that young generation must be in universities and universities must provide an opt ground for them to improve their level. In my viewpoint it is to some extent true. Had we had more and better educational facilities, we would have had a much more advanced and successful society.
At second place, I would like to mention one of the negative aspects of limiting availability of universities such as restricting the number of educated people in a country, which may afflict on speed of developing a country on account of the fact that having a wealth of educated existence in a country is one of the vitally important section of improvement.
There is however a revers side of this coin, those who agree with the idea of universities should be available for only students in higher levels, commonly are ready to express preventing students from making effort to enter the university. As an illustration, students in this way are forced to study more that leads them to be more successful.
All in all, all these stories come down to the fact that all students deserve to be accepted in universities. Also I would like to suggest universities provide an environment to persuade students to study more to get the high levels. Had we had more and better educational facilities, we would have had a much more advanced and successful society.
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Sentence: However the rest take it for granted that only universities should accept students who are in high levels of studying.
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Sentence: In my viewpoint it is to some extent true.
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