You work at home and have a problem with piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop company which supplied the equipment. In your letter
-describe the problem with the equipment
-explain how this problem is affecting your job
-say what yo want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in order to complain about the internet router, that i bought from your store, at 12th Avenue, 3 weeks ago. I am also writing to explain how this is impacting my daily work.
I am working online from my home as freelancer English teacher. I have been registrated at one website for teaching people and internet conention is crucial for me in order to do my job. In fact, the internet router in question, was working properly in the begining an out of the blue, the internet was disconnecting for couple of minutes or made the camera video frozen for longer period of time.
In fact, in the last 3 weeks, i have lost 10 extremely important clients, because of this issue. Consequently to this i earned three times lower salary than last month when i have normal Internet connection.
For this reason, i am claiming material damage for my lost working hours which are in total amount of 5000 dollars. I am also asking you to change my router with new one, as we signed in the agreement, so that i do not have to claim my rights in court.
I would be grateful if you can solve this matter as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
XXXX XXXXX
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...omplain about the internet router, that i bought from your store, at 12th Avenue,...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...how this is impacting my daily work. I am working online from my home as freel...
^
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my home as freelancer English teacher. I have been registrated at one website fo...
^
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...internet was disconnecting for couple of minutes or made the camera video frozen ...
^^
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...made the camera video frozen for longer period of time. In fact, in the last 3 weeks, i hav...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...portant clients, because of this issue. Consequently to this i earned three times lower sala...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...use of this issue. Consequently to this i earned three times lower salary than la...
^
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nternet connection. For this reason, i am claiming material damage for my lost...
^
Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... as we signed in the agreement, so that i do not have to claim my rights in court...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51376146789 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47007167977 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.155567463 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4545454545 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19680228536 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074590574943 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02883820004 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094153604457 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339509960227 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.