It is generally taken for granted that marriage, as we all have probably heard and experienced, not only can be considered as an inseparable section of every individual’s survival, but, also provide an opt ground to create new families. There are some countries with a belief that parents should decide who their children will marry, irrespective of their age and stauts in the society which most of the times results in failed marriages, because the couple is not mature enough to make important life decisions and carry out the responsibilities in an orderly way. The just give away their children in marriage because they consider it their right to do so.
Firstly, I would like to point out the positive aspects of arranged marriages of children by their parents which includes parents life long experience, which makes a fundamental contribution to comprehending who is the right person. As they have undoubtedly come across variety of people with different attributes and nature, so they can comprehend well which person is right for their child.
There is however a reverse side to this coin. The ones who agree with the idea of every one should choose their own partner, commonly tend to be more realistic. In their viewpoint one who wants to get married is the only one who is aware of his or her demands and desires on account of their life partner. They wait for the right time to get married which is financial and emotional stability. Because they are not willing to take a risk of getting married at age where the are not being able to give their 100 percent to the relationship.
To sum up, all these long stories come down to the fact that is spite of every parent’s experiments, every existence should choose his/her partner. To me it is to some extent true and every one should have an opportunity to choose as well as consulting with his/her elders no matter his/her parents or anyone else although the parents are the only ones who understand their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...dual's survival, but, also provide an opt ground to create new families. There ar...
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Line 1, column 553, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an orderly way" with adverb for "orderly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ions and carry out the responsibilities in an orderly way. The just give away their children in m...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h is financial and emotional stability. Because they are not willing to take a risk of ...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... a risk of getting married at age where the are not being able to give their 100 percen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84210526316 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71839260528 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0232648836 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190456442323 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707510793286 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053048875742 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116055001386 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149955284327 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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