In today modernized world, people are becoming more progressive and finding the new ways for entertainment, collecting assets and making their life easier. Methods of getting happiness is different from one person to another. So people have to provide lots of thinking and efforts to fulfill their aspects. I am fully agreed with the above argument and I will discuss my opinion in forthcoming paragraphs.
Some people are thinking about their carrier opportunity since their childhood and some are as parents plan their children's secure future life in their minds. For instance, people want to become doctors and engineers for their great future and they are applying this formula on their children's life too. However, on the other hand, there are some people who always live as per their current situations and requirements and act regarding their current needs and possibilities. They plan only those things who will help them in near future. For instance, people join professions on accounts of recent requirements and be able to supply needs for their professions.
In my opinion, Every people should have to set their minds plans to current time. Sometimes, They may not be able to get the things as they decided.
In conclusion, we should have to spend our precious time only on those things which are realistic and prepare our plan for current future.
- By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. 56
- Many people believe that television programs are of no value for children. Do you agree? Why or why not? 80
- Many people believe that television programs are of no value for children. Do you agree? Why or why not? 67
- some parents send their children abroad for study.Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12053571429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60686382435 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7609303581 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5833333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236963683545 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871298531649 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675611838217 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132752714414 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498122530986 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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