The lecture and the reading are both about some measures to protect Torreya trees that are native to Florida. The lecturer casts doubts on the claims made in the article and three supporting details to support the claim.
First of all, the lecturer says it is unlikely for Torreya trees to grow in micro climate as the author of the reading believes. That is because the temperature around the microclimate is not suitable for these trees as the area is affected by global warming. This leads to more wet lands dried out. As a result, these trees will unlikely will survive in that microclimate.
Secondly, the speaker contradicts the statement in the article regarding assisted migration.She points out another example of a plant called black locust which was migrated by human had negative impact on the plants that grew there. As such case, by introducing new plant to an entirely new location will lead to unpredicted environment.
Last but not least, the lecturer refutes the claim that Torrey trees to be protected in the research centres. She argues that, by doing so, the tree will lose its resistant capability to disease and capacity to survive in long term. This is because, relatively large and genetically varied wild trees have more diverse trees and resistant to diseases which is not the case in the trees that is kept inside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: She
...he article regarding assisted migration.She points out another example of a plant c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, regarding, second, secondly, so, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 228.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93859649123 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55171201861 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5601402663 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.363636364 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21009572189 0.272083759551 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739557778023 0.0996497079465 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455526072873 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111367247293 0.162205337803 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333888437994 0.0443174109184 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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