The supplied two table illustrates the comparison of sales item of coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 of different countries namely united kingdom , Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
In the first table, the united kingdom sales the coffee by 1.5 millions of euros in 1999. After five years, the value of coffee has dramatically rose by 18.5 millions of euros. Then, in Switzerland and Denmark the sales of coffee had 3 and 1.8 millions of euros respectively. They have slightly rise up in both countries in 2004. Likewise in 1999 the Belgium had sold 1 millions of euros and they upsurge by approximately 2 in 2004. The Sweden sales the 0.8 million s of euros and they go up by 0.2 millions of euros in 2004.
In the second table, the sales of bananas in Switzerland had 15 millions of euros in 1999.They upsurge by 32 millions of euros in 2004. In united kingdom and Belgium had 1 and 0.6millions of euros respectively and they have shoot off by 4.5 and 3.5 in 2004.similarly in Sweden and Denmark there is slight decline in 2004 comparing to 2009.
Overall, the bananas was the most contributed sales and coffee was the least contributed sales of five European countries in both year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'table' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tables'.
Suggestion: tables
The supplied two table illustrates the comparison of sales ite...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ison of sales item of coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 of different countries ...
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Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ifferent countries namely united kingdom , Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Swed...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gdom , Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. In the first table, the unite...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...he united kingdom sales the coffee by 1.5 millions of euros in 1999. After five years, the va...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
...s, the value of coffee has dramatically rose by 18.5 millions of euros. Then, in Swi...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...e of coffee has dramatically rose by 18.5 millions of euros. Then, in Switzerland and Denmark...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
...Denmark the sales of coffee had 3 and 1.8 millions of euros respectively. They have slightly ...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
... euros respectively. They have slightly rise up in both countries in 2004. Likewise ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...htly rise up in both countries in 2004. Likewise in 1999 the Belgium had sold 1 millions...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '1 million'.
Suggestion: 1 million
.... Likewise in 1999 the Belgium had sold 1 millions of euros and they upsurge by approximately...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
... million s of euros and they go up by 0.2 millions of euros in 2004. In the second table, ...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
...the sales of bananas in Switzerland had 15 millions of euros in 1999.They upsurge by 32 millio...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...erland had 15 millions of euros in 1999.They upsurge by 32 millions of euros in 2004...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '32 million'.
Suggestion: 32 million
...llions of euros in 1999.They upsurge by 32 millions of euros in 2004. In united kingdom and Be...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'shot'.
Suggestion: shot
...ons of euros respectively and they have shoot off by 4.5 and 3.5 in 2004.similarly in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, second, similarly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76666666667 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73422340502 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438095238095 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6578580312 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.1 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253939433243 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124347047225 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626998345637 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190775915647 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524472972707 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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