A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Elly,
Hope you are doing well. I want to thank you for consenting to look after my house and my pet, Tommy for a few days. I am writing this letter to walk you through some important points before I leave.
To begin with, you can buzz me anytime at my concern number at 1234567856. You can leave a voicemail, if I am not available, I will call you back.
Furthermore, please feed Tommy twice a day. I have kept his food on the top shelf right above the kitchen sink. Also, he needs to be taken out for a stroll in the morning and evening time. Tommy is a friendly dog and he is acquainted with you.
Finally, it would be great if you could water the plants every other day. Besides, unplug electronic appliances and turn off the water source each night. I have packed the refrigerator with food for you. The house is all there for you to enjoy.
Once again I appreciate your help and I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Best Regards,
Kirti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...am not available, I will call you back. Furthermore, please feed Tommy twice a d...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dly dog and he is acquainted with you. Finally, it would be great if you could ...
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Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eeting you soon. Best Regards, Kirti
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38674033149 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30331750131 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668508287293 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.8375625743 44.8134815571 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.9333333333 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0666666667 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254647557633 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758458590489 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655799810608 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132611670389 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552937125946 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.15 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.