Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The job choice is one of the most decisions of human life. Some people believe that if a person has a secure job, then it is not necessary to satisfy with it. On the other hand, others think the exact opposite of it. From my point of view, the enjoyment of the work is the crucial part of having it for the following reasons.
Above all, it is difficult to spend most of your time doing a job that you do not enjoy. The unsatisfaction of life is the source of stress. Moreover, a person would presumably struggle to create an effort in a work which limits the chance of a person to develop. The real example of this is my former biology teacher. He does enjoy teaching children, but he does this only because of money. When he altered his major to comedian-actor, he always tells people that the most important consequence of work is the enjoyment.
Furthermore, despite what work that person interested in, they all have a chance to be successful. For example, my sister wants to follow her passion and wants to become an artist in the future, however, her parents force her to become an engineer. After graduating college, she entered into university as an artist without the permission of her parents which is the most valuable contribution of her life. Now she is still studying, but the difference the happiness she obtains.
All in all, the enjoyment is the key requirement of choosing work, not the security and salary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63921568627 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64496358617 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572549019608 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0241662356 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8666666667 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134812971418 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444821246197 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512483776141 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765285826225 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467245732622 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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