THE MEDIA SHOULD INCLUDE MORE STORIES WHICH REPORT GOOD NEWS. WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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THE MEDIA SHOULD INCLUDE MORE STORIES WHICH REPORT GOOD NEWS. WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

In the modern life, the media is has become more popular all over the world, but there is are much bad news outweighs good news. It is said that people had better increase more posts of the good news in the advanced technology people had better make use of advanced technology to increase more posts of good news. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
On the one hand, media includes a lot of negative news nowadays. Firstly, bad news has a terrible effect on viewers, especially youth. The young who have intense curiosity would imitate some damaging acts in news like robbery or burglar because they do not know that these acts are really dangerous and this would ruin their future. Therefore, the number of criminals would be picked up. Secondly, reading much bad news makes people become insensible, they think that the atrocious things are the fact and they do not need to find out solutions to the problems happening now.
On the order hand, I strongly believe that the media should have more stories about the good news. The most important reason that good news helps individuals feel more optimistic, they might have the good faith in the future so they would try to improve their lives and make life become better. For example, when residents do something good like growing trees or cleaning up the garbage at the beach and it is reported in the media, they would get rewards or a range of compliments by the viewers, so they feel happy and have the motivation to do more admirable deeds. Moreover, the wonderful deeds posted in media make readers admire the person doing that and feel motivated to do the same.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I strongly agree that the media should include more articles about good news.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76797385621 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31897460403 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3011776204 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329297700683 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127486042961 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895784031558 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22274459374 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069433135195 0.056905535591 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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