In the twenty-first century, education and training are one of the most initial need humans which it has to provide by societies or parent that in the way of provision of education facilities sometimes occurs conflicts between parents and societies. Some people believe that home-schooling prevent children's progress. Others contend that education in the home let spark the abilities' brain of children. This essay aims to discuss both points of view and purpose a personal opinion.
On the one hand, many believe that home schooling is very problematic in terms of social skills and being time-consuming for parents. Parents practically do not have sufficient and necessary resources and time to educate children. one parent may need to give up work. Moreover, failure to learn social compatibility is as a result of home schooling. For example, at school, children learn how to get on with each other and improve their own social communication. Thus, training at home not only can be bored for children but also prevent the parent progress. Nevertheless, home schooling can be useful as well.
On the other hand, it is undeniable fact that, education at home avoid probable discipline problems. In addition, by home schooling children not only can work based on their own pace but also private tutors lead to fast improvement their ability. Home schooling is one of the most accessible and simple types of education. For instance, for a village without a school and weak transportation, home schooling is the best option to continue education. Hence, cognition of children's ability and prevention of transient social tensions are both potent points of home schooling. I believe in order to move forward, education has to do in the best form of its own and there is no matter where it occurs at the home or at school.
In the end, the proper education has a vital role in determining children's' future while its location is not as important as it. However, home schooling work on especial ability children, education at school can improve social abilities and social compatibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09356725146 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89889240384 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520467836257 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1667271451 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6842105263 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57894736842 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35559843664 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119117156561 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757889309538 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22357658753 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375380493472 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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