whilst a number of people underscore the importance of cyberspace and social media as the main objective of the information source, others advocate that books and publications are still as a mandatory means to transfer information. there are rational arguments on both sides of this contentious topic which will be elaborated in detail, followed by my own take on the matter.
On the one hand, one cannot deny that there are certain advantages of electronic equipment like computers over books such as fast speed, vast memory and easy retrieval. That is to say, these features allow users to access facile to the information without wasting their time searching some sort of information. Take a student in a university for example who has to spend a lot of time and energy to borrow a book or another source in order to complete his/her thesis, if there is in university's library. These electronic devices undoubtedly would facilitate this trend to make headway toward gaining the information.
On the other hand, we should not lose sight of obvious disadvantages of electronic requirements and cyberspace when it comes to providing information. Apart from their rewarding, information putting online on various site may be full of errors which sometimes making readers confuse. While in the process of publishing a book, it is edited by proof-reading for several times. Hence, the percentage of feasible errors fall down. Along with this, information can be available by propagating of books while the lack of wireless antenna would create an obstacle to reach the information on numerous occasions.
To conclude, the benefits accruing from electronic means compared with books and publications are by no means negligible but books and written words as an ancient source of information are more reliable and comfortable.
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- A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise Currently the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away thus the proposed new jazz club in Monroe the C Note would have the local market all to itself Plus jazz is extremely popular in Mon 30
- Some people believe that planning for the future is a waste of time because that focusing on the present is more important Do you agree or disagree 78
- 43 The following appeared in a memorandum written by the chairperson of the West Egg Town Council Two years ago consultants predicted that West Egg s landfill which is used for garbage disposal would be completely filled within five years During the past 57
- Butter has now been replaced by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the southwestern United States Only about 2 percent of customers have complained indicating that 98 people out of 100 are happy with the change Furthermore many server 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, still, while, apart from, as to, for example, sort of, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25597269625 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96527130788 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617747440273 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4258001677 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254458446007 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761771946741 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504184910784 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14533301366 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292245124003 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.