The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Both maps give an overview of the City Hospital and how it was changed over the course of four years, from 2007 to 2010.
The City Hospital sits on the City Road and around it, there is a Ring Road which makes people easy to drive. In 2009, the hospital used to let the staff and the guests park their cars together in the same place, right to the east of the entrance. But in 2010, the car park was separated into 2 different places. One for the staff is on the same place as the old car park and another one, the public car park, is to the east of the Hospital, beside the Ring Road. The bus station which used to be in the same place as the old car park, now also had its own place, that is to the west of the Hospital Road when turning from the City Road to the Hospital Road.
Two new roundabouts, which can be seen on the 2010 map, were also built. The first one is at the junction of the City Road and the Hospital Road, and the last one is in front of the hospital, on the Hospital Road. Apart from those changes, everything remains the same.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.05741626794 4.92477711251 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.89928650035 2.65546596893 72% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497607655502 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2103668403 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2222222222 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212793842638 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958398262283 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691284475098 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161519226449 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202368180176 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.56 11.4140731707 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.99 8.06136585366 74% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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