There are many companies that hold many seminars and classes for their employees to heighten their knowledge of both public relationships and technical issues. Some employers emphasize on the former one but many other accentuate more on technical problems. Personally, I am of the opinion that employers must look for hiring knowledgeable persons as an important aspect. There are some reasons mentioned below to explain knowledge is more important than the ability to relate.
First of all, The only important thing that play a pivotal role to attract the customer is the result. For example, if you relate well with new costumer, you can draw his eyes in the early meetings. But presenting new accurate technical information to him is the only way to have the customer in long run. It is not possible without studying hard and gaining relevant sciences in the school and university.
Second, the ability to socialize with other people can help you niche a good position or job, but your technical information that comes from your university and school can assist you to fortify your position and not being fired. I can remember one of my colleagues in an engineering company with fantastic ability of socializing but without any technical background. At first all the employees connected to him and had fun with each other, after a while he could not surmount with the technical demands of other colleagues and subsequently the problems surfaced which resulted in being fired.
Last but not least, studying hard make you be a professional person in your area. this ability help you to be the best in your territory. There are many engineers that do not need even to speak with others but are in the first rank. For instance, a water engineer that specializes on designing water distribution network for a city is graded only with his/her skills not with socializing abilities.
In conclusion, not until you are a professional person, you can reach the pinnacle of your careers. It is noteworthy that the ability of socializing contributes to gain the aid.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 16
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 71
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... be a professional person in your area. this ability help you to be the best in your...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to even'?
Suggestion: to even
...ere are many engineers that do not need even to speak with others but are in the fir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03197674419 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78686146213 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529069767442 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.04845474 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.823529412 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188725560144 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625321215987 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542913456264 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982918125147 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261690174065 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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