You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
Hello Sir/ Mam
My name is Abhishek Singh, employer of USG Boral India Ltd.. Off lately, your organisation that is TP Link, installed router at my home address so that i can facilitate work from home. I would like to register a complain regarding modem as it is not working properly.
First of all, modem gets automatically switched off after a certain period of time. I tried to check the issue but the modem was very hot when I touched the surface. I believe that it should not be that hot. Secondly, internet is getting slowed by every shut down of that modem. As per you already know, we have to attend meetings online, however due to this issue, I am unable to attend and yesterday, my whole team was getting menaced as we were discussing project guidelines and my network was not allowing me to continue that meeting.
I hope you will able to understand my concern. I would like to get my modem replaced on priority. Also find the reasons why internet speed is dropping down.
Yours Faithfully,
Abhishek Singh
Employer ID 1411915
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...k Singh, employer of USG Boral India Ltd.. Off lately, your organisation that is T...
^^
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...alled router at my home address so that i can facilitate work from home. I would ...
^
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ork from home. I would like to register a complain regarding modem as it is not working pr...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...omatically switched off after a certain period of time. I tried to check the issue but the mod...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e to get my modem replaced on priority. Also find the reasons why internet speed is ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...get my modem replaced on priority. Also find the reasons why internet speed is dropp...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, regarding, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68648648649 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53527919835 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697297297297 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5633248866 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0752149868429 0.216113520407 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241709696017 0.0766984524023 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334834689872 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480952684831 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258816909528 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.