Internet contains a lot of information, however, sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the last decade, plenty of advancements occurred in the technology and internet is the one the prevalent system made by the internet without which human existence will be tough. For different reasons people open world wide web and they are rely on it for the information provided. However, some people argue that such information can be wrong and I believe that on many instances, the knowledge provided is inaccurate while majorly, it is correct.
Admittedly, books are prime source of knowledge but it is difficult to read everything from the books. In this situation, internet can be consulted and people can read point to point instead of reading all the pages which is very time consuming. For an illustration, people search on Google.com everyday to accomplish their everyday task successfully. Further more, scientists publish their research papers on the web as it it in reach of millions of people which is not possible with the newspapers or books.
However, many information websites publish the data received from public and without verifying it is shown on their webpage. To substantiate it, Wikipedia.com is the most preferred website to know about a unknown person change the data of Miley, a famous singer, and publish himself her brother and breached into her security and was proven as threat. Apart from that, the webpages can be hacked and any irrelevant information can be shown. Twitter account getting hacks is the silent example of this.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, it is clear that information on internet can be incorrect but this happens rarely. Making internet more secure and by providing various verifications, internet will render the service as best option for knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
...people open world wide web and they are rely on it for the information provided. How...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...lustration, people search on Google.com everyday to accomplish their everyday task succe...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...ish their research papers on the web as it it in reach of millions of people which is...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he most preferred website to know about a unknown person change the data of Miley...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17204301075 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80255569406 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0615215801 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153372571854 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549670776608 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452967395028 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969483526769 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344852413167 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.