In the past ,people used to do daily activities on their own,as the time changed the way of living also changed,now a days we are using electronic equipments like washing machine,hand-held mixer,vacuum cleaner e.t.c. By using these we can save time and do some productive work. Every coin has two faces,
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: farrahfan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In the past ,people used to do daily activities on th...
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Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...used to do daily activities on their own,as the time changed the way of living also...
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Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , now
...e changed the way of living also changed,now a days we are using electronic equipmen...
^^^^
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... changed the way of living also changed,now a days we are using electronic equipments like...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...nged the way of living also changed,now a days we are using electronic equipments like...
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Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hand-held
...ectronic equipments like washing machine,hand-held mixer,vacuum cleaner e.t.c. By using th...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , vacuum
...nts like washing machine,hand-held mixer,vacuum cleaner e.t.c. By using these we can sa...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 41.998997996 17% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 253.0 1615.20841683 16% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 51.0 315.596192385 16% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96078431373 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.67234511778 4.20363070211 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10572390168 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 45.0 176.041082164 26% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.882352941176 0.561755894193 157% => OK
syllable_count: 82.8 506.74238477 16% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.0 49.4020404114 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0195701512564 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0101727045314 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0101727045314 0.0667982634062 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0195701512564 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 78.4519038076 18% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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