There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Today music is the most preponderant way to relax and entertain yourself. Music all around the world is of conspicious importance.
Music is a way to express your sentiments and for this purpose various kinds of music are produced in the world. When people feel tired due to their hectic work, they listen to their favorite music and sedate their nerves. Music is also very famous now-a-days because with advancement in technology it has become a facile task to enjoy music everywhere whether in a car while driving or on a the walking track while doing daily exercises. All kind of music is just a click away. It has also become a famous hobby among people to collect various unique collections related to music and people also feel pleasure in dancing on their favorite songs. For example, according to recent surveys in different vocational institutes, results showed that almost 90% of the students in their leisure time enjoy and listen to their favorite musicians and they go through an evocative feeling while doing this.
The value of folk music is of supreme importance. It is realted to culture of a country and people have a spiritual and psychological bonding with it. National songs are an epitome of patriotism and enhance passion of people for their motherland. Cultural songs symbolize norms and traditional values of a country and people love to listen music in their mother tounge. International music whether it is Jazz, Rock, Pop or Classical is heard everywhere in the world but it can never take the place of folk music. For example, Coke Studio in Pakistan is all related to traditional folk music. Its ratings are sky high and people feel enticed by its euphonious melodies. Their songs are inculcate in people's mind and they feel it is more dulcet than international music.
To recapitulate, music is an embodiment of peace and Harmony and it is a pivotal source for people to serene themselves.
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Suggestion: a; the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92024539877 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67318572851 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4947221342 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3529411765 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36915586081 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144169371422 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920015945047 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235101664943 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728561848031 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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