You are going to another country to study. You are like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend in your letter
• give details of your study plan
• explain why you want to get a part time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Jenny,
I am writing this letter to tell you that, I got admission in English training course for 8 months in Toronto. My departure date is soon in next 2 months.
Let me explain my situation in detail, you know better than me that the cost of accommodation is very high in your city because it is the heart of this country. My education expense are bit expensive and my parents cannot afford after 2 months of my study. So, I want to do a part time job as soon as I arrive to meet my living and educational expenditure in Toronto. I can do any kind of work like housekeeping, gardening, Nanny etc.
You are currently doing a job and have a huge social circle. You can ask your friends, colleagues or even to your parents to tell you any type of opportunity for me or you can give me a reliable agent number who helped the students for getting temporary work during their studies.
I am waiting for your reply.
Yours Faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
... this country. My education expense are bit expensive and my parents cannot afford ...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t expensive and my parents cannot afford after 2 months of my study. So, I want t...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... months of my study. So, I want to do a part time job as soon as I arrive to meet my livi...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g, Nanny etc. You are currently doing a job and have a huge social circle. Yo...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntly doing a job and have a huge social circle. You can ask your friends, collea...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ven to your parents to tell you any type of opportunity for me or you can give me...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the students for getting temporary work during their studies. I am waiting fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61393440262 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3204774517 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1111111111 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350830186585 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119736519462 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798933980009 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185467680813 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832103774285 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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