Everything people do (when acting rationally), either as a country or at the individual level, can only be understood when put into the context of the society in which they live. But that is a broad statement. Within the notion of society, there are many factors that deserve consideration, and the immediate situation, we can call it "the environment", is by and large the most important. This is helpful in understanding the deeds of the great people - those who have shaped the way we see life.
Art is one instance that deserves study. It is virtually impossible to understand the great artistic manifestations that led to the most impressive changes in society if we do not consider the lives of the artists that carried on such revolutions. For example, Fridda Kahlo was the first Mexican feminist - at least in the modern definition of the concept - long before the Mexican Constitution considered women as equals to men. In her days, society in Mexico was not as open as was society in other places, such as France. But Kahlo was greatly influenced by what was happening around her, and unlike most Mexican women, who had no clue of the fight for equal rights going on in Europe, Kahlo was aware of it because she traveled a lot to Paris and Madrid.
Of course, there are other things within the notion of society that matter, beyond the immediate situation. The case of Donald Trump's presidency is a good example of the other parts of society (racism, in this case) going against the immediate state of affairs. It would have been unimaginable that a candidate with such a strong hate for Latinos and Muslims would gain the presidential race, back in 2008 when Barack Obama - the first non-white president - was first elected to office.
However, in the case of Donald Trump's election to office, it is important to understand that there were many voices expressing their views long before this paradoxical choice happened. The problem was that the progressist movement had gained momentum back in 2008, leaving those right-wing voices unheard by the noise they were making. When that momentum disappeared (probably due to the perception of poor results by the Obama administration among the incumbents), then it was the turn for the right-wing movement to seize control.
Therefore, among the many other factors determining people's attitudes within the notion of society, it is clear that the immediate situation (the zeitgeist) is by far the most revealing variable, even though there may be other factors to take into account because of how many, more often than not, tend to leave unheard the voices of the few.
- The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disag 66
- "Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men 49
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- “Over the past year, our late night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station’s coverage of l 55
- People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reas 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to study'
Suggestion: to study
.... Art is one instance that deserves study. It is virtually impossible to understa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, at least, for example, of course, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95701357466 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73266196346 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531674208145 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3865537244 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.9375 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106230017965 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350031362342 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329658905324 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061780477556 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416685713546 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.