The bar chart compares four countries in terms of tourists choosing the different kinds of accommodation when they had a vacation in year 2012.
The bar chart compares four countries in terms of tourists choosing the different kinds of accommodation when they had a vacation in year 2012.
Overall, the hotel was the most accommodation chosen in nations. Additionally, the quantity of people in Northern Ireland selecting Caravan was higher than those of other countries.
The percentage of visitors choosing hotel in England was highest, around 55%, while the figure for Northern Ireland was slightly lower, approximately 45%. However, the proportion of travelers choosing for Caravan in Northern Ireland was nearly six-fold higher than in England. By contrast, people who cooked for themselves made up about 28% and roughly 12 % in England and Northern Ireland respectively. Meanwhile, both nations had the same figure for Camping.
Turning to the remaining countries, more tourists in Scotland stayed in hotel than Wales, with over 50% and nearly 49% respectively. While the percentage of travelers in Scotland chose Camping was lowest in two nations, just over 5%, the figure for holidaymakers who made a choice for Caravan in Wales was lower than that of Scotland, roughly 9%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to camp'.
Suggestion: To camp
...rcentage of travelers in Scotland chose Camping was lowest in two nations, just over 5%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37430167598 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86142932427 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575418994413 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1437047229 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.888888889 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219844385721 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131800750499 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.307488156999 0.0667982634062 460% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270606278042 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.421188346393 0.056905535591 740% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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