Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is the fact that food is always the crucial thing of a human being. Because It can give us practical energy and some nutrients for our bodies to use our lives during a day. So, Nowadays, there are a plenty of channels to get your food. Someone may not be able to concoct their meals or be in a hurry. Then they have to go to a restaurant to have their food. While someone loves to have their meals at home. However, I personally prefer the latter for some reasons which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, Eating food at home is more peaceful and comfortable than eating in the restaurant. I can fully enjoy my own meal without any disturbance and I don’t have to waste my time waiting in a long queue to get my food. In some big restaurants, It is not only you in that place but there are also a large number of people who are their customer. So, When, you step into there. you will probably notice that It is so bustling and busy. Many waiters are walking around and serving the food to those customers. And some people are talking so loud that you can’t have your enjoyment in your meal. For example, In my town, There is a large restaurant near my house. Whenever I want to have a party with my friends. So I often throw a party there. But This restaurant always gets crowded every afternoon. So, I have to make some reservation every time as well. Afterward, we come back to this restaurant. Many of us aren’t satisfied with the atmosphere in there because they can’t bear up with some noisy sound which comes from people who get drunk and the loudspeaker turning on all the time.
Secondly, By cooking and preparing a meal by yourself at home can benefit you in some ways like improving your cooking skill. Because Nowadays as the advent of internet connection. you are able to search various cuisine recipes that are available on the website. As a consequence, you will learn how to make it and you can adjust them as your own recipe and moreover, you can make your own restaurant if your foods are delectable for many people. For instance, My dad, formerly, was unable to cook. but, when he wanted to try something new. At that time, he decided to look for some easy recipe on the internet and then, he started cooking trails and errors at first and he continually practiced it until now he is able to cook some delicious meals for me.
In conclusion, Having and preparing meals at home is my preference for two main reasons which are more peaceful and I can fulfill my appetite happily. And it can be your skill and learn something about that as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44769874477 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43849788784 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487447698745 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1528699964 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8666666667 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261991223524 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610808342249 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632176069668 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163489170911 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155980194569 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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