Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples.
Generally, People in this world are not the same type So, they have different characters and minds.
When it comes to making a relationship with those people. How do you know what kind of friend that you are looking for? However, There are some people use the first impression to judge people’s characters because it is accurate while some people use the time as a tool for judging them. In my point of view, I agree with the second method for some reasons which I will explain in this essay.
Firstly, Sometimes your sudden judge may not always be correct. As I have said before that people are varied characters, which means they have both good and bad sides, so there is someone who just pretends to be your friend in order to hurt or betray you. At first, they behave well in front of you. but In the behind of them may be totally different from your sight. For example my cousin’s case, She was betrayed by her friends by having an affair with her boyfriend. And then it broke her feeling and made her not trust her friend anymore. Hence, to avoid not truly sincere friend you had better take some time to check anyone’s real character before judging any relationships.
Secondly, The relationship that you have made by judging from the first impression will not last longer than judging them by the time. An idiom said that something that you got it easily and similarly you may lose it so easily as well. Because you don’t give much time to prove all of the essential qualities of becoming your friend like trust or supportive, reliable behaviors etc. As a result, you will not know them well which indicates that your bond with your friend is not developed and finally, they will become a short-term friend or just an acquaintance.
To sum up, I believe in the attitude which using time as a tool to judge anyone’s character is much better than first impression method for the reasons that you can avoid a counterfeit relationship and the friends that you take your time to prove is going to be your long-term friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, while, for example, kind of, you know, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67582417582 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52851149214 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497252747253 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7453190863 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.117647059 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219982652319 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751841332744 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835708101818 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143879002203 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435788446887 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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