Parents are the best teachers
There is a common belief, that parents transfer general skills and knowledge to children in a much better way and more efficiently, than educational institutions do. I share this point of view, too, and will explain my vision further.
There are actually many reasons why moms and dads are the best educators, but I will present only a few in the current essay. First of all, parents and grandparents are the first “instance” of interaction with the surrounding world for children, which makes it easier for kids to absorb information received from them. In other words, at an early age a person’s comfort zone is limited to his/her family. Secondly, it is parents, who know their heir better, than anyone else and, therefore, it is them, who are able to provide with all the necessary information, as well as to help the child to form an understanding of what is good and what is bad. The latter statement is also connected to another argument, which is the fact, that only parents have the right to choose or decide on the system of values their children will form.
However, it is essential to maintain balance over the circle of interaction and communication of younger generation. In my opinion, it is unacceptable to narrow the network of schoolchildren to their relatives only. A person should interact with people of difference ages, faith, opinions in order to become an individual and a complete member of the society. At the same time, it is important to take into account the fact, that one’s mother or father cannot specialize on all studies and fields, which makes the role of teachers irreplaceable and extremely valuable.
To conclude, I would like to emphasize the importance of both children’s right to interact with their parents, and their right to communicate with the outer world. After all, educational system has been developing for centuries, and there is a reason for schools to exist and to be so popular up to these days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, after all, as to, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95795795796 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98543509939 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5260376203 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102752781547 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279193117275 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358319627678 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486294830552 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335074973535 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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