Experiencing difficulty to speak foreign language in a foreign country can cause severe issues, either social or practical. This situation mostly occur when someone just moved in to a new country and could not speak the native language. I, personally agree with this statement that said limitation of language can obstruct our life.
The most simplest thing that might affect to our social life is how the way we communicate with people around us. As a social creature, human need someone to get associate with. Without communication, human will lack in every aspect of their life. For example, if we just arrived to a new town, we need to know how to use the local public transportation or how to reach a hospital.
Another aspect that may be troubled if we did not adapt to local language quickly is our practical effect. To fulfill our life necessity, we need to find a money through getting a job. We would not integrate with other workers in our work if we do not understand what they mean, or worse, there is a possibility a fatal misunderstanding can happen. In some case, people made mistakes on their job because they cannot fully understand what their boss are saying.
Although we can use international language such us english, not all country can figure out how to use it, specially in a developing countries such as Indonesia. There may be a few who can understand english, like in tourism attraction. But for local resident, we use our national language. In conclusion, i agree that language barrier can cause serious problem in our social and practical life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'simplest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: simplest
...f language can obstruct our life. The most simplest thing that might affect to our social l...
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Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the simplest'.
Suggestion: most the simplest
...f language can obstruct our life. The most simplest thing that might affect to our social l...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
...ill our life necessity, we need to find a money through getting a job. We would not int...
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Line 4, column 306, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e our national language. In conclusion, i agree that language barrier can cause s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83394833948 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78321262538 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8835380722 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210450183459 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793426337041 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109753845524 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142748687885 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107078571436 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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