The given chart depicted billion kWh of production and consumption of electricity in 2014 in top ten countries. Overall, it can be clearly seen, production of the electricity is way more than the consumption, however, this was not always the case. In Germany, consumption exceed over production with 55.9 apart. The first result worth pointing out is that China has became the highest involvement with electricity. It shows that China has produced 5.398 and spent 5.322 billion kWh in 2014.
Contrast to Korea Republic, which is the lowest among ten countries, measured 485.1 for production and 449.5 had consumed. Moreover, Russia have the slightest difference between production and consumption. Move to the second highest, United States, reached more than 4.000 for generating and 3.866 for utilization.
If these ten countries sorted by the highest to the lowest, it would be China, United States, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea Republic respectively. For the conclusion, in 2014, there are several countries in the world categorized as top ten for the production and consumption of electricity.
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The bar chart illustrates the amounts of electricity produced and consumed in ten countries in 2014.
It seems that China had higher amount of generation and utilization approximately 5,398 and 5,322 billion kWh respectively, followed by the US with 4,099 billion kWh produced and 3,866 billion kWh consumed.
In contrast to Korea which had lower figures among other countries at the same year. Morever, all top countries produced adequate electricity so that their productions were slightly more than their usages except Germany which used more electricity than its generation.
Russia, Japan and India occupied positions three, four and five in the top ten respectively, with regard to generation figures [between 1,057 and 871 billion kWh]. In addition, Canada, France , Brazil and the Republic of Korea came next in order of reducing amounts of electricity produced and utilized.
Overall, China and united states were leaders in both for generation and utilization of electricity with huge difference in compare to other countries in 2014.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...lt worth pointing out is that China has became the highest involvement with electricit...
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Line 2, column 142, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Russia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...nd 449.5 had consumed. Moreover, Russia have the slightest difference between produc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42937853107 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90170063537 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3730430138 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223724103807 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923864659037 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084956628701 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151129663886 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383044034331 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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