I am totally disagree with the statement which said these days we are having too much choices in our life. We might be easily found so many things with different range of brand and function at the store. This variety helps human to consider what will suit best with their personal needs, because every single person has different lifestyle, finance, and taste. Another reason that will support my preference is, technology become improved as the demand of the market is diverse.
First thing that has an important role in our life is food. We would probably has different kind of taste for our consumption. For example, a vegetarian that could not eat something where there is a meat inside is probably often happen in our surrounding. But are they keep eating the same old salad everyday? The answer is not. An innovation has occurred as a result of this. Chef is starting to make menu as delicious as common food, but only made from vegetable.
At present, the world has become a modern place to live. There are uncountable alteration that happened or currently happening right now. The simplest thing that can be noticed is the way we communicate toward each other. Back in the day, only wealthy people has access to have telephone in their houses. Contrast to today, almost people has a cellphone on their hand. This proved that all stage of society can afford to buy an electronic. To fit in, many brands are producing a cellphone with wider range of price, from the cheapest one to the expensive one, so everybody can choose based on their capability. As a result, company is starting to produce a product with low cost but high quality result.
In conclusion, our life become better with many choices that appear these days since all the things that we need are fulfilled easily and practical.
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It is believed that people in
It is believed that people in this time have more choices than the past. In my opinion, this statement is totally right, as the advancement in technology and globalization provided people with a wide range of choices. On the other hand, this leads to difficulty in making decisions.
First of all, since the last century, the world experienced a massive development in technology, in addition to that the world became like a small village with the internet and globalization. This is obvious in the vast number of companies and startups that emerge every day worldwide which provide solutions for all problems that can face anyone nowadays. Solutions are available for the majority of our problems today with a huge number of choices whether free or paid. For example, there is a wide range of communication application, online payment solution, blogging, and others.
Even though, the diversity of solutions available is leading to distraction and hesitation to choose the best solution in term of cost, convenience sustainability, support, and other aspects. Customer feedback and recommendation may help as many companies provide testimonials and feedback to reflect their credibility and attract consumers. For instance, other companies adopted many options that help people to make their decision by releasing an unboxing video or a trial of the product or consuming applications that provide other customers opinions.
In conclusion, more choices are available nowadays for people than what was available in the past, this trend is augmented by globalization and technology. In the same time, it may be more difficult to choose from this diversity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
I am totally disagree with the statement which said these day...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...which said these days we are having too much choices in our life. We might be easily...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... in our life is food. We would probably has different kind of taste for our consump...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'meat'.
Suggestion: meat
... could not eat something where there is a meat inside is probably often happen in our ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...are they keep eating the same old salad everyday? The answer is not. An innovation has o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78274760383 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45571168062 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623003194888 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0826732255 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.85 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.65 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130975015948 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339777128861 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419776948981 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757943615864 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413742540216 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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