Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Getting a job in which you can work with other people is better than getting a job in which you work alone.
Some people prefer working independently while others rather work with groups. Both options depend on each person‘s personality. I personally believe that it’s better to work with the team. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, working as a team makes the progress way easier not only for the company but also for the employee. In the context of huge projects, an individual cannot do all the work alone efficiently while in a team, tasks can be divided into sub-projects and each person can be responsible for divided parts. In the case of working as a team, the summation of different abilities and knowledge is shared which can lead organizations and businesses to achieve better outcomes and expand their companies. Therefore, employees who have team-work skills have this chance to occupy higher positions and climb up corporate ladder easier because of the better outcome of their team-work. As an instance, in a car design company, although, there are very famous car designers, we can see that the final design in team-work is better and completed in compared to one-person design.
Another reason is, working together let the coworkers learn to rely on each other. Trusting on teammates provides the strong relationship between them. It makes the working space becomes friendly and also provides a feeling of safety that the errors on work can be found by team members, not by the bosses. Also, relying on each other causes the team-member do their best because they know if they do not do their job well, the team cannot reach the final goal. For example, when I work as a part of a team, I try to do my best because I do not want to fall down my coworker's trust.
The last reason is, collaborating with others provides the opportunities to learn more and more. People who work together can learn from each other. Everybody has different skills and abilities which are shown up in team-work collaboration while in an individual job there is just one person's skill and idea. For example, in my case, I remembered I was working for a university committee and I faced with a difficult challenge which I could not find out a solution for it, therefore, I bring it up to my team -workers and they look at the challenge in a totally different way and had given me a very practical solution to deal with the problem.
In conclusion, I think working as an independent person or team-worker have advantages and disadvantages. It really depends on people's personality to find out which situation is more suitable for them. However, nowadays it is much better to work in a group in order to reach the goal in a hastily manner and efficient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82692307692 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76795353446 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4039601594 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25233390129 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090001510997 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500387714944 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165621475094 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411348421732 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.