The maps illustrate the path to get to a town hospital in two different years(2007 and 2010).
City hospital had main features which remained without any change such as: ring road, hospital road and city road, but considerable changes occurred in order to extend car park area and facilitate transportation.
Firstly, car park area in 2007 which belonged to both of public and staff cars just devoted to staff car park in 2010 and new public car park built in east side of city hospital.
Secondly, bust stop locations which was located alongside of hospital road in 2007 removed and new bust station added in west side of a hospital road.
Lastly, two roundabouts constructed in order to simplify transportation. One of them located in south side of a town hospital and had conjunctions with ring road,city road and new bus station and the other built in south side of a hospital road and had conjunctions with hospital road, city road and new bus station.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elonged to both of public and staff cars just devoted to staff car park in 2010 a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , bust
...ospital and before car park. Secondly,bust stop locations which was located alongs...
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Line 6, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h was located alongside of hospital road in 2007 removed and new bust station ad...
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Line 6, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ated alongside of hospital road in 2007 removed and new bust station added in we...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , city
...ital and had conjunctions with ring road,city road and new bus station and the other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85119047619 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72646988587 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488095238095 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8348806176 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.833333333 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.23603664747 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221799042734 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119958307843 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050555651268 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136733978144 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423891723364 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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