The first diagram illustrates the process and necessary equipment for manufacturing cement and the second diagram gives information about using cement for concrete production in order to use in building applications.
Overall, approximately 5 stages are needed to create cement which is started by crushing row materials. Moreover, 4 raw materials are used for concrete manufacturer.
At the first stage of cement production, limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder. Then, the resulting powder is mixed before it passes into rotating heater. After heating, this mixture is ground. The final product is packaged in large bags.
Cement is one of the 4 materials which is used for producing concrete, alongside water, sand and gravel. To be exact, concrete consist of 15% cement, 50% gravel, 25% sand and 10% water. Then all these materials are blended in rotating mixer which is called concrete mixer.
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 78
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. 84
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32413793103 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80953023947 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675862068966 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1937495861 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299362194825 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999252221923 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11016755881 0.0603063233224 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184695786585 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118390641941 0.0580467560999 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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