Today most of the humans have excessive options to make a selection so that people sometimes bewilder to make a right choice. In my view, as time goes by, people face to increasing number of selections to pick.
Firstly, economic growth and progression provide many choices in comparison to the past and people have better buying power in most of the countries.As a result, it helps to scale up companies productions.For instance, manufactures provide us with endless selections of products in contrast to the previous time so when you want to select a kind of dress you are overwhelmed by different models, color, types, prices of available options.This facilities help people to find best option based on their styles.
Secondly, globalization make possible to supply diverse selections with no time and place limits. In fact, international companies compete to obtain greater market share so they provide conditions in order to facilitate accessing to their products in every locations of world. For instance, Amazon and Alibaba websites are international selling platform which enable us to buy various goods, food, devices and etc. from diverse companies all around a world easily. Therefore, such services add more choices to our before ones and we come up with long list of options to choose.
In conclusion, immense economical and technology developments besides globalization phenomenon make much more options and selections ready for us in every aspect of life in comparison to the past. From my point of view it is completely true that we have excessive choices today and it makes our life more easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the humans') or simply say ''most humans''.
Suggestion: most of the humans; most humans
...extent do you agree or disagree? Today most of humans have excessive options to make a select...
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Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ducts in contrast to the previous time. Thus when you want to select a kind of dress...
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Line 4, column 412, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...ons or you completely confuse to select a food by watching long list of foods in resta...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...us to buy various goods, foods, devices and etc., from diverse companies all around a wo...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...se companies all around a world easily. Thus such services add more selections and w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, kind of, in contrast to, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15073529412 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83485921961 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9293135877 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.769230769 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225136737743 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106705253654 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177460671736 0.0667982634062 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207158524373 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221974264338 0.056905535591 390% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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