Back in time, in era of gold mining, horses and cowboys, many people held a gun. Over hundred years until now, its still popular to legally hold a gun. However, despite the need of feeling safe or protected family and possessions, I agree that individuals should not be able to carry guns for two reasons.
The first major reason for banning individuals from carrying gun is that vast of guns within society might lead to a civil war. I concede that most of gun holders, carry the gun as a tool to protect their possession, family or themself, when, not only the current terror threat linger, but also society become more violent. However, if people are widely allowed to legally carry guns, the number of armed individuals might rapidly grow and lead to a civil war. Take, Brazil, for example. Vast of people in Brazil carry gun, some legally or illegally, and it is unsafe to anyone to walk a city after dawn as well as robberies are daily routine for local police force.
Secondly, the law and guidelines in what conditions are people allowed to carry gun. There is no international law to protect a gun holders as well as possible victims. People who will carry gun, might be confused of their right and obligations. In criminal history, they are many cases of gun used as a self-defence tool, which caused innocent people to die. The USA is well known by the widespread law allows almost everyone to hold a gun. The prime example is right from the USA, where mom of two, shoot an innocent child coming to visit her sons in the middle of the night. As a result she was found guilty and punished for an excessively long time in prison.
In short, despite the obvious fact of increasing violence and terroristic threat across the globe, I strongly believe that individuals should be banned to hold a gun, and only protective and emergency personnel should have this right.
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- More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poo 56
- The charts below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. 78
- Living in big cities has a negative effect on people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l, for example. Vast of people in Brazil carry gun, some legally or illegally, an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in short, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67469879518 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4498749083 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.324072794 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155463481968 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054456491586 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639446645863 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105988672797 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238140735469 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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