History is collection of past events. It not only tells us about past events but also cause and impact of events. I believe that though, the world have immensely changed and become more complicated than past, knowing history always help us to understand important events which in turn help in making decisions. I would like to explore this in the following essay.
First and foremost, past gives lots of important information be it any field such as medicine, literature, mathematics, business etc. For example, knowing past patterns in stock market helps economist to make conjecture regarding profit or loss in business. Moreover, many medical treatments are advancement of past research and development. Therefore, it is clear that information from history plays vital role in today's world.
Besides this, the horrendous decisions of past prevents the world from making same mistake again. We all know the result of the use of atom bombs in Japan and its aftermath. This desolate event curtails many countries from using the nuclear weapons again as we all are aware of its consequences. Additionally, study of history helps leaders to avoid dictatorship and also empowers people to revolt against it. Hence, in making decisions history plays significant role.
Last but not the least, advancement in technology is outcome of past. Early man made invention of weapons and thus, next generations made progress in it. Also, the invention of wheel became basis of today's development in the transport. There are many such examples which proves that development and progress is the result of knowledge from past.
To conclude, from aforementioned examples it is clear that study of history helps in making important decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 276.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29347826087 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79601944605 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.385400142 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1666666667 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253799494468 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752985399885 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548563775397 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134251021844 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485845635082 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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