The table below shows the results of survey to find out what members of a city sprots club think about the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisions where relevant.
The table illustrates the consequences of a poll of member's view in the city sports club about some major categories: activities, facilities and opening time.
As can be seen from the table that, for all types of categories, both males and females felt that satisfying and even better, with all was over 63 per cent. It is particularly true for club facilities, which is considered as very satisfied with the high percentage, 64 per cent for women as appose to 63 per cent for men. The gender gap was relatively small for those who found club facilities satisfying, with 22 and 27 percent respectively. On the other hand, Opening hours showed a different pattern. Whereas nearly three quarters of females quite satisfied with this factor, only under half of males felt that. Interestingly, the proportion of men did not like this aspect was very high, 37 per cent. For activities, the gender gap was also very large; however, the percentage of males and females citing the view of this was inversely proportional with opening hours. 95 per cent of males felt that satisfying and even better; in contrast, only just over the two third of that had the same opinion.
Overall, the table shows differences in the opinions of members on some aspects of this sports club.
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Sentence: As can be seen from the table that, for all types of categories, both males and females felt that satisfying and even better, with all was over 63 per cent. It is particularly true for club facilities, which is considered as very satisfied with the high percentage, 64 per cent for women as appose to 63 per cent for men.
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.838 4.0
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