nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world.
how can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
That is true many metropolitan turn into a universal cities, and they have their own beneficial and drawbacks. There are several ways, in which government ensure that all civilizations can live in calm with together.
Firstly, government must create essential infrastructures for cosmopolitan cities. Such as, international schools or local language learning courses. These facilities provide a situation in which people can adopt with new society easily. Secondly, providing some booklets about necessary numbers, address and something like that is useful. In my money, it would be great, if governments provide some lesson about different cultures in schools in order to preparing children for adopt new cultures and endure them.
Living people from different cultures with together may cause some problems. For avoiding these problems, government must ordain some laws. The argument and combat between people about cultural and religious issues will be reduced by this protection program. For example principle religious in my home country is Islam, but everyone is free to live according to his or her idea, and there are lots of churches and temples here. That is to say that, government is the main power source in any country, so it must use its own power. For example lots of TV programs are made by government’s budget, so this tool can be used for this purpose.
In summary, globalization con not be stopped, so governments must do their best and proper cities and people for easy adoption, and it can be possible by education, some law and others.
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| 2018-10-11 | maedeghorbanian | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'city'?
Suggestion: city
...many metropolitan turn into a universal cities, and they have their own beneficial and...
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Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s;s budget, so this tool can be used for this purpose. In summary, globalization...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in summary, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23412698413 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84763353591 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7069798118 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249045264879 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845102512939 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080313887707 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15238942183 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04774162195 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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