Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people.Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
It seems that the youth crime rates, namely burglary, armed robbery, and assault mobile snatching and pickpocketing, are being increased all over the world than ever before. This phenomenon is appeared to be caused by two major factors and to be solved a number of remedies.
Possibly, the prime origin is the unemployment. The study, conducted by BOCSAR, has already yielded that unemployment leads to the creation of huge income disparities in society, thus, particularly leading to an increase in crime. An unemployed person needs to run his household by any means and when he does not find any legal opportunity to earn; he may get involved in criminal activities to finance his living. Equally, an important root is a family breakup. State-by-state analysis, by scholars from the Heritage Foundation, indicates that 10 percent increase in the percentage of children living in single-parent homes leads typically to a 17 percent increase in juvenile crime.
There are two effective solutions to the problem of rising youth delinquencies. One way to tackle this is a provision of employment opportunities. If every single juvenile were provided with the job, it would make the youth economically active. By doing this, adolescents can have fixed incomes and be busier. Hence, the crime rate would fall. Another method of dealing with criminals is that there need more services available to help family members overcome difficult issues of conflict. If family members could benefit from facilities at the appropriate, family breakup would not occur as.
By way of conclusion, the origins of joblessness and family structure appear to be the main causes. The remedies such as employment possibility and family services can be fruitful for lessening youth crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30604982206 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96390651583 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640569395018 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.4070307957 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0625 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188774595813 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616898860816 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061802231306 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127417885407 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709147589941 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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