The cheap airlines are enabling an increasing number of people to travel to foreign countries. What advantages might there be to society in general?
There is no doubt that with the advancement of technology, air travel has become much more easier in today’s world than ever past. This essay totally agree with this proposition that these kind of air companies will have positive effect both those who are willing to travel other part of the world in terms of economically and of course on the economies of host countries.
On the one hand, nowadays’ people, especially young generation have a tendency of discovering holiday destination in which they have never been. They believe that being in different countries will have opportunity to face and to meet different culture and friends who are coming from varied places and this experience would benefit them in both business world and daily life. For instance, according the Pegasus Airlines, which its policy based on costumer happiness and cheap flying, number of young passenger has increased 30% in compared to last year’s rate and Head manager of the company Ali Sabancı, explained to Air Magazine that all clients were able to reach unknown holiday destination with less than USD 50 in compared to last year’s number of passenger.
On the other hand, we know that discounting on airlines tickets has positive effects upon the economy of host countries in terms of indirectly. It does mean that increases in tickets will led to rise amount of tax during the financial year and the amount of money can be used to build up new general services such as child-care centers, hospitals, bridges and so on but it is undeniable point that all these kind of budget will return to citizens of country as a benefit sooner or later. For example, Financial Department of Government explained that It has seen enormously an increase number of tourist who came to Turkey through using air travel. Could you guess that how much money we obtained from these tourist?
All in all, in my opinion ,being more cheaper air tickets have much more advantages than disadvantages. If we want to improve as a country we have focus on positive sides instead of negative ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... technology, air travel has become much more easier in today's world than ever past. T...
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Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...otally agree with this proposition that these kind of air companies will have positive eff...
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Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y Ali Sabancı, explained to Air Magazine that all clients were able to reach unkn...
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Line 6, column 189, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...oes mean that increases in tickets will led to rise amount of tax during the financ...
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Line 6, column 403, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... on but it is undeniable point that all these kind of budget will return to citizens of co...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed from these tourist? All in all, in my opinion ,being more cheaper air ti...
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Line 9, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ourist? All in all, in my opinion ,being more cheaper air tickets have much...
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Line 9, column 35, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
... All in all, in my opinion ,being more cheaper air tickets have much more advantages t...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sitive sides instead of negative ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, of course, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67689566401 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58452722063 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.91318583 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.636363636 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7272727273 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123108856806 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416339274058 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372351845534 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675168254356 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263338483668 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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