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Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Nowadays, nations gets trapped into a knotty dilemma, whether they should put efforts on environmental protections rather than increase their speed on economic development or vice versa. Some people deem that nations should keep wilderness areas in their natural state, even with the help of compulsion by law, while other people criticize this move because it is somewhat cruel for people who still living under poor conditions. The thing as I see it, the wilderness areas may contributes to survival and economy. Protecting them may bring more advantages than merely develop economy.
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Sentence: The thing as I see it, the wilderness areas may contributes to survival and economy.
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