The bart chart below shows the value of exports and imports of one country in five different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant
The bar chart demonstrates five different years exports and imports' values of one country. The x and y axis of the bar chart shows year and the values of exports/imports, respectively. Whereas, the blue and purple bar indicates exports and imports, respectively.
According to the chart, generally both exports and imports every year experienced an increase in value during period of 1983 to 2007, except in 1989 to 1995 in which it was relatively constant. The extremely growth of imports occured during period of 1995 to 2001 and 2001 to 2007 which achieved an increase of approximately USD 42,000 millions, while a huge increase of exports value ws obtained during 1995 to 2001 in which achieved an increase of about USD 30,000 millions.
To sum up, the value of exports and imports of the country gradually enhances in 1983 to 1995 and enormously increases during period of 1995 to 2007.
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The bar chart demonstrates five different years exports and imports' values of one country.
The bar chart demonstrates exports and imports' values of one country in five years.
Sentence: The extremely growth of imports occured during period of 1995 to 2001 and 2001 to 2007 which achieved an increase of approximately USD 42,000 millions, while a huge increase of exports value ws obtained during 1995 to 2001 in which achieved an increase of about USD 30,000 millions.
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Suggestion: Refer to extremely and growth
while a huge increase of exports value ws obtained during 1995 to 2001 in which achieved an increase of about USD 30,000 millions.
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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 151 200
No. of Characters: 726 1000
No. of Different Words: 70 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.505 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.808 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.626 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.668 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.559 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.797 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.27 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4